This has potential

Needs more sound effects, needs to be more frantic with a D&B feel and then it will be awesome. I'm thinking something in the vein of ParagonX9's style, but of course with your awesome part-playing and inventive shit and whatnot it might turn out even more awesome.

Not Bad

Put this in the Techno section! It fits.

Pretty Awesome! But...

I'm not going to download this until it's complete. :P Your musical ideas are amazing, your instrumentation is amazing and this first half or first third of the song is pretty well organized. Just watch out, towards the end the ideas seemed to get a little disorganized, but maybe that's just because this isn't finished yet. Build it up towards the end, maybe repeat a previously-used idea but with extra for the climax. I'll completely download once this is finished! :D